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[–]Purplekeyboard 8 points9 points  (1 child)

with GPT 3 it always generated something you'd expect from a high-school middle-school child

That's exactly how I describe GPT-3's poetry, it's like something you'd get from a bright middle school student with a good vocabulary. GPT-4 is much better at it.

[–]onaiper 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Here's an AI reading the second AI poem:

https://voca.ro/1eXHyW9ZrLJh

EDIT: It's by https://genny.lovo.ai/

Kind of expensive, I blew most of the demo credits for this.

EDIT EDIT: https://voca.ro/1eXHyW9ZrLJh <- the previous link had the lines merged in the wrong order

[–]onaiper 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Another one:

The Bookshop

Let us savor the cumulative silence,
Crooked fingers turning yellowed pages.
The words encircle us in a vintage fugue.
Let us enchant ourselves with these spines,
A row of moribund works which project
Their infinite mind into a future only dust shall witness.

Dust tomes, abiding in morose sepulchers.
A plaque engraved with the titles of the deceased.
Bookended, nestled in this quiet corner,
The moribund are immortal, infused
In the vitriolic ink of austere intent.

Now come with me, surrender to remembrance.
Let us delve into the realms of the forgotten,
To beget a bright tomorrow from yesterday's ashes.

The enigmatic whispers that curl 'round the brocade.
There, the esoteric verses - like dust motes -
Suspended in the western sun, that shines
Its pallid beam 'cross the indexed obsolescence.

The cracked spine, bound in sensual concupiscence,
Where the shadows dance in crimson leaps,
Rejoicing in secrets shrouded in lost tongues.
We, the silent invaders of parched wisdom,
Quill abstained, pitifully estranged,
Shall behold the grand parade of transient thoughts.

The Redeeming Word

The man behind the counter, a Sibyl of sorts,
Inspires wonder with a toothy smile,
His furrowed brow etched with the knowledge of
A thousand stories that never meet the light.

Beside the register, the clock stands still,
Its gilded hands forever arrested in a futile plea.
A pantheon of eras trip in unison,
Leaving past and present intermingling,
Dancing in a whirlwind of wisdom's ghosts.

We find solace in the tomes that line these walls,
Like cobwebs spun from intellect and dreams.
Bound by leathered spines and fading ink -
The humble shrine - a symphony of silence.

Transcendence awaits upon the consuming page,
Craving to lock its gaze upon our soul.
We take the plunge into the vast abyss,
Suspended in a dense sea woven of words
That twist and dance like serpents, unbeknown.

And there! A wounded phrase, cradled in neglect -
Winking through vestiges of forgotten joy.
Teetering on the precipice, a chance,
To exhale redemption in the echoes of time.

The Epilogue

Here we are - entombed in this quiet
sanctum, a cathedral of bound brilliance,
Communing with sages and dreamers alike,
Their voices weaving harmonies in the deep,
A tapestry of tales transcending time's line.

The tick-tock lull of a drowsy chronograph
Mocks our race to ingest the feeding, fading word.
The sun lowers its gaze upon the impotent hour,
Chasing, choosing, our final reverie.

Reticence resounds, a melancholy lilt,
Illuminating darkness undeterred.
Words wither and seep into hollow minds,
Yet endure, emboldened in textured grace.

Fingers linger, a sweet caress, farewell,
To the sheathed knowledge soft against our touch.
In this hallowed haven of whispering pages,
The tomorrows are sanctified and summoned.

Let the veneration of language endure,
The living and the dead, entwined in print.
Our keen ambition in pursuit of truth,
Stirs the relentless hand of time to still,
Till the bookshop's hallowed doors meet again.

[–]chinguetti 2 points3 points  (1 child)

ABsolutely. I am having a laugh with historical rap battles.

Hannibal vs Scipio.

(Verse 1: Hannibal)

Yo, it's Hannibal the General, the Carthaginian menace,

Crossed the Alps with my elephants, I'm here to teach a lesson,

I'm the bane of Rome, the one who brought the Senate to their knees,

Burnin' up the battlefield, all the Romans flee.

Now let me introduce you to Scipio, the so-called Roman savior,

But I'm the one who wiped out armies with my tactical behavior,

I'm the nightmare that you dread, the one you can't forget,

I'll leave your whole empire soaked in blood and sweat.

(Verse 2: Scipio)

They call me Scipio Africanus, the Roman warrior elite,

Steppin' on the battlefield, I never tasted defeat,

I know you crossed the Alps, Hannibal, that's cute,

But I'm the one who defeated you in Africa, let me hit you with the truth.

I learned from your tactics, adapted and overcame,

While you were busy losing ground, I was rising to fame,

Zama's the place where I crushed your dreams,

I'm the one who silenced your elephants' screams.

(Verse 3: Hannibal)

Hannibal's back, ain't no stoppin' my verse,

Rippin' through your legions like a lyrical curse,

Remember Cannae, Lake Trasimene, and Trebia too,

I'm the one who made the Romans fear the things I'd do.

So you got me in Zama, I'll give you that, Scip',

But remember it took you years to even make a dent or a rip,

I'm the one who dared to challenge, never bowed to your might,

Kept Rome up all night, filled 'em with fright.

(Verse 4: Scipio)

Yeah, you had some victories, but let's not get carried away,

I took the fight to your homeland, made Carthage pay,

I'm the one who rewrote history, solidified my name,

While you were forced to flee, livin' life in shame.

You're a has-been, Hannibal, your time is long gone,

While the Roman Empire rises, stretches far and strong,

I stand tall, victorious, a legend for all to see,

While you're just a footnote, a dark curiosity.

[–]onaiper 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So you got me in Zama, I'll give you that, Scip',

But remember it took you years to even make a dent or a rip,

Oh god, this is hilarious!

[–]wsharkey 1 point2 points  (7 children)

Nice. Care to share the prompt you used?

[–]onaiper 6 points7 points  (6 children)

I got both of these from just a simple:

"Write a poem in the style of T.S.Eliot"

It's not really in his style I think... but it's amazing what it came up with with such a simple prompt. The second one I posted in the comment is the same but with higher temperature.

[–][deleted] 4 points5 points  (3 children)

It’s not really his style and I wouldn’t say it’s too great but it’s very cool- you might get better results with more with more specificity by recommending specific Eliot poems though

[–]onaiper 4 points5 points  (2 children)

Yeah, it's really not his style at all. I mostly gave it that prompt to nudge it away from the sing songy, cliche-laden outputs of gpt3. You must admit this is quite a bit better.

I'll try your suggestion tomorrow, but I think if I recommend specific poems it will just write some sort of "parody" of the specific poem.

Maybe it's because I was expecting so much worse, but I'm genuinely impressed by this poem. Especially by the second one I posted in the comment in this thread.

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

For sure, it's a big step up from GPT3s!

I agree, about the parody issue, I wonder if it would be better to try to ask it to replicate a movement like "modernism" or "romanticism" or even specify dates and geography? Very cool stuff nonetheless.

[–]onaiper 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll play with it more towards later today.

Here's an AI reading the second AI poem:

https://voca.ro/1eXHyW9ZrLJh

EDIT: It's by https://genny.lovo.ai/

Kind of expensive, I blew most of the demo credits for this.

EDIT EDIT: https://voca.ro/1eXHyW9ZrLJh <- the previous link had the lines merged in the wrong order

[–]wsharkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! Fantastic!

[–]SP_Magic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love Tolkien’s long, drawn-out writing style and once asked ChatGPT (3.5) if it could write “its own story in the style of Tolkien.” However, it just wrote in its typical style but made the story about Hobbits and Middle-Earth.

[–]EthanSayfo 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Yeah, but your prompt was for it to generate a dirty limerick. ;-)

Seriously though, what was the prompt?

[–]onaiper 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very simple prompt.

"Write a poem in the style of T.S.Eliot" Or one of them might have been "In a modernist style" or "the style of Ezra Pound"

But nothing more in depth or complicated, I swear. I cranked up the temperature on the second one though.

[–]Miireed 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not poetry but I used it to generate custom bedtime stories for my 6yo daughter the other day and she loved them. I will have to work out more specific prompts to make it more age appropriate. It also needs to be guided on what to be detailed about and what's less important but overall it's great.

[–]clckwrks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

>when you ask it to dance

[–]PhysicsIll3482 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I can't figure out how to make GPT-4 stop writing in basic rhyme schemes, like ABAB or AABB. At this point, I think its predecessors are far superior in their abilities to generate good poetry. GPT-4 is basic and cliche. Huge downgrade.

[–]onaiper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hm... what are you prompting it with? I just tell it to write in the style of various poets. Though I never give it a subject to write about. The interesting thing is that it's always able to explain itself however opaque the text seems. What do you think of the second poem I posted in the comments?