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Discussion => Silk Road discussion => Topic started by: Edawg420 on September 18, 2012, 09:58 pm
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Hey guys,
I am searching for the psychonauts, i have bleed my mind to write my feelings and experiences from a DMT trip. I feel i have incorporated the onset but for actual experiences i am at a loss because it changes so drastically each time. I am in need of help for the final paragraphs. This is what i have so far:
Thoughts are slipping
Emotions are ripping,
Reality is fleeting,
Yet my Heart is still beating.
Life is halting,
Time is faulting,
Illusions are drifting+
Yet my being is still living.
Space is crashing
Universe is thrashing
Paranoia is leaving
Yet my soul is still breathing.
Caution leaves quickly,
Euphoria comes swiftly,
Our world shifts distinctly
Yet I embrace this feeling.
Into insanity I descend,
Entities come to amend,
Dreams start to bend,
Yet divine comes everlasting.
Visions....
Any help would be appreciated greatly, i would also like some constructive criticism.
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Hey guys,
I am searching for the psychonauts, i have bleed my mind to write my feelings and experiences from a DMT trip. I feel i have incorporated the onset but for actual experiences i am at a loss because it changes so drastically each time. I am in need of help for the final paragraphs. This is what i have so far:
Thoughts are slipping
Emotions are ripping,
Reality is fleeting,
Yet my Heart is still beating.
Life is halting,
Time is faulting,
Illusions are drifting+
Yet my being is still living.
Space is crashing
Universe is thrashing
Paranoia is leaving
Yet my soul is still breathing.
Caution leaves quickly,
Euphoria comes swiftly,
Our world shifts distinctly
Yet I embrace this feeling.
Into insanity I descend,
Entities come to amend,
Dreams start to bend,
Yet divine comes everlasting.
Visions....
Any help would be appreciated greatly, i would also like some constructive criticism.
Dude. I really fucking liked that! U´ve got me reminiscing about my first DMT trip ..Ur good
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That was really cool dude ;D, i used to write a bit of poetry. Maybe ill have a crack at it about my first DMT experience. Pretty hard topic thou, no linguistic tool such as poetry even seems to get close to describing the nature of a breakthrough trip on DMT.
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The poem is the tits man.
you should check out the song "Works Every Time" by El-P from the album Cancer 4 Cure
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Hey guys i have been working on it a bit today and i changed up some of the structure and tried to get the rhyming down a bit better. Thoughts comments and some ideas for the last couple paragraphs would be most appreciated.
Thoughts are slipping,
Emotions are ripping,
Reality is fleeting,
My Body is breathing.
Caution leaves quickly,
Paranoia comes swiftly,
Consciousness is heaving,
My Heart is beating.
Life is halting,
Time is faulting,
Ego is dying,
My Mind is flying.
Space is crashing,
Universe is thrashing,
Energy is expanding,
My Being is everlasting.
Insanity I descend,
Entities come and amend,
Joy is filling,
My whole is willing.
Visions of secrets,
Thoughts of the deepest,
Knowledge is inspiring,
My soul is tiring.